Tuesday, September 27, 2011
The Clown Who Falls Down
Completed another revision of The Klown Kroo. Lots of trims here and there to make chunky prose read more smoothly. But I also added a couple of scenes, which pushed the overall length of the novel to 123,760 words. Specifically, Karl aka Touches got a new poignant scene, and Vern got a new disturbing scene. I want to go back and reread the first few pages, though. I still think the opening paragraphs need work. The rest of it is pretty good, though.
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Got a copy you don't mind sending my way?
ReplyDeleteI'll send it to you immediately. I think it still needs a little work, but it's close, very close, to all it can be.
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